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After fighting through 50 different story ideas, the boys have picked Time to Die as the script to write. They are now starting the writing process.

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Re:[7] Sequence Method Question

March 22, 2006 · by The Urban Shockah · Permalink · comment on this post in the forum · Category: Original Version, technique

What I would like to see (if you have it, but maybe this is exactly what you're working on!) is a list of the scenes, in chronological order, and with time stamps, if you got 'em. I don't think I'll be watching Blue Velvet anytime soon, but I'd love to get my hands dirty with this.

That said, I think I've settled on the PONR being the moment where Dorothy discovers him in the closet. This propels him from voyeur and passive (at least in this sequence) observer to active participant.

That sounds pretty good to me!