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Hey folks, welcome to Spitball!, the world's first screenplay written by blog.You may want to read the posts in our about section, particularly our Statement of Purpose

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After fighting through 50 different story ideas, the boys have picked Time to Die as the script to write. They are now starting the writing process.

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Re: In A World -- Google Image Challenge!

January 23, 2006 · by Burley Grymz · Permalink · comment on this post in the forum · Category: Original Version, the screenplay

I think it's really interesting how we started with these 50 doing simple evocative wisps of ideas, and then ended up writing nearly complete log-lines. These are among your strongest, I think--but also the deepest and best explained--so maybe I'm reacting to that. We'll have to poll my picks and see if I'm weighted towards these.

I particularly like that you broke the time barrier (the past! What a concept!), and broadened the scope into more human concerns. Our struggle, if doing sci-fi, will be in finding that human balance.

One note about The Angry Youth--I'm not sure which MTV program you were referring to, but it made me think about something else entirely.